http://www.unseenwhispers.com/2008/12/06/dr-quigley-moved-away-from-hamburgers/ A Journal and Forum for Writing in the Arts Tue, 25 May 2010 17:38:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/2008/12/06/dr-quigley-moved-away-from-hamburgers/comment-page-1/#comment-7 J. Scott Mosel Sun, 07 Dec 2008 16:02:31 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=200#comment-7 Yes, many problems for the writer appear in this poem. Most of them revolve around the issue of voice. The voice of Dr. Quigley is strong in the first half of the poem, and then the freak author takes over and grinds this poem down to nothing but philosophical hamburger; not that there is anything wrong with hamburger, of course. Wimpy did have it right. By the way, just who is Metaphorical Moses, and what tablets will decend from the mountain? Yes, many problems for the writer appear in this poem. Most of them revolve around the issue of voice. The voice of Dr. Quigley is strong in the first half of the poem, and then the freak author takes over and grinds this poem down to nothing but philosophical hamburger; not that there is anything wrong with hamburger, of course. Wimpy did have it right. By the way, just who is Metaphorical Moses, and what tablets will decend from the mountain?

]]> http://www.unseenwhispers.com/2008/12/06/dr-quigley-moved-away-from-hamburgers/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Metaphorical Moses Sun, 07 Dec 2008 03:36:07 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=200#comment-6 I think Wimpy had it right. I think Wimpy had it right.

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