Comments on: What to Make of It http://www.unseenwhispers.com/2009/04/14/what-to-make-of-it/ A Journal and Forum for Writing in the Arts Mon, 06 Feb 2012 14:23:52 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Kilauea Poetryhttp://www.unseenwhispers.com/2009/04/14/what-to-make-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-191 Kilauea Poetry Sun, 19 Apr 2009 05:40:21 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=1206#comment-191 I know what you mean about photographs..that bird looks beautiful..this is sad though. Nice one- I know what you mean about photographs..that bird looks beautiful..this is sad though. Nice one-

]]> By: J. Scott Moselhttp://www.unseenwhispers.com/2009/04/14/what-to-make-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-189 J. Scott Mosel Wed, 15 Apr 2009 17:27:17 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=1206#comment-189 Thank you for the inspiring comments Sarah and Suzanne. I am becoming more and more pleased that my wife pointed out this beautiful work of nature lying in our path the other day. Photographs seem to be a great starting point for other forms of art. I should take my camera everywhere, forcing myself to record! Thank you for the inspiring comments Sarah and Suzanne. I am becoming more and more pleased that my wife pointed out this beautiful work of nature lying in our path the other day. Photographs seem to be a great starting point for other forms of art. I should take my camera everywhere, forcing myself to record!

]]> By: Suzannehttp://www.unseenwhispers.com/2009/04/14/what-to-make-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-188 Suzanne Wed, 15 Apr 2009 14:43:46 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=1206#comment-188 Very beautiful poem. I love it. The opening stanza is absolutely perfect. and: I noticed how my fingers could not sense death: like a lover, sometimes they are the last to know. (this might be my favorite line!) ... I let go of my desire and watched its colors fade–the same light in the same way that will someday claim mine. Delicious. How are your MFA plans going? :) You should definitely go for one. Very beautiful poem. I love it. The opening stanza is absolutely perfect.

and:

I noticed how my fingers could not sense
death: like a lover, sometimes they are the last to know.

(this might be my favorite line!)

…

I let go of my desire and watched its colors

fade–the same light in the same way
that will someday claim mine.

Delicious.

How are your MFA plans going? :) You should definitely go for one.

]]> By: Sarahhttp://www.unseenwhispers.com/2009/04/14/what-to-make-of-it/comment-page-1/#comment-187 Sarah Wed, 15 Apr 2009 12:28:34 +0000 http://www.unseenwhispers.com/?p=1206#comment-187 I always seem to write dead animal poems around Easter. Lovely poem, Scott! I always seem to write dead animal poems around Easter. Lovely poem, Scott!

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